I love this! It was entertaining before, but now, BAM! it's overflowing with personality and fun antics! The artwork has been polished far more than expected - nice and clear, bold line work. I experienced no trouble at all in understanding what I am seeing and what is happening within this adventure. No notation was required to explain anything - you fulfilled the goal of "show not tell" spot on. The flow and timing have improved too! I like the pacing this story has. You demonstrate an instinctual understanding of good cartooning. Beyond this though, you display determination to improve and polish your work as the demands of a job increase. Both of these qualities will serve you well in the animation industry.
I love this! It was entertaining before, but now, BAM! it's overflowing with personality and fun antics! The artwork has been polished far more than expected - nice and clear, bold line work. I experienced no trouble at all in understanding what I am seeing and what is happening within this adventure. No notation was required to explain anything - you fulfilled the goal of "show not tell" spot on. The flow and timing have improved too! I like the pacing this story has. You demonstrate an instinctual understanding of good cartooning. Beyond this though, you display determination to improve and polish your work as the demands of a job increase. Both of these qualities will serve you well in the animation industry.
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